Слайд 2Making an opening statement
It goes without saying that people have many
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important events during their lives. While doing a project on life events, I have found some data showing life moments which are considered to be the most essential for (by) people living in Zetland. I am going to analyze the data and express my point of view (вот здесь бы добавить точности – для значимости темы проекта).
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Слайд 3Reporting facts +
As can be seen in (from) the chart (opinion poll)
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, having children and getting married are supposed to be the most vital events for most respondents (people) in Zetland -57,5% and 55,6% respectively. It is also clear that getting a job is the least crucial with even less than tenth of people (respondents) choosing.
Crucial – extremely important - the least crucial – есть ли смысл снижать его значение?
Слайд 4Making comparisons+
Looking more closely at the figures of the chart, we
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can see that leaving home is almost 10% more popular than getting a degree. Meanwhile, getting a degree is around four times as many as the figure for getting a job, which is quite surprising as many people strive to graduate from the university and start their career immediately.
10% more popular не встречала сравнения в процентах – на 10 процентов меньше в популярности (популярность в процентах?) если number of responses то не завершена мысль
as many as – сочетается с object во мн числе
Слайд 5twice/three times etc as many
There are now over 11 million shareholders, three times as
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many as in 1979.
And there are three times as many non-religious right voters in the Republican party compared with the religious right
About three times as many people complained about high food prices as about high drink prices.
Слайд 6Outline a problem -
Consequently, having examined the data of the chart,
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I can outline one of the possible problems: most graduates have difficulty in) finding a job and applying their knowledge in real life. I believe that the best solution is to learn the employment trends and get more work experience while studying.
Consequently – as a result то есть выше должна быть информация – в результате чего
по условию – problems with life events- в работе представлен как отрицательное событие – сужение на problems related to finding a job
Слайд 8Conclusion +
In conclusion, I think the importance of any life event
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depends on the life stage we are living on. Therefore, some events can seem less crucial with time whereas the others can be realized as really important.