Учимся писать письмо

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You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen-friend Tom who writes:
... In our city we have an annual competition for teenagers who make their own short films. This year I got the second prize for a film about my grandparents. Do you think it’s important to record family history? Who do you think should do it? How can it be done best?
This month is my mom’s birthday and now I am thinking about a gift for her.
I want it to be very special...
Английский язык
Write a letter to Tom. In your letter:
answer her questions,
ask 3 questions about his mom.
Write 100—140 words.
Remember the rules of letter writing.

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Moscow Russia 03/05/17
АДРЕС! ПРАВЫЙ ВЕРХНИЙ УГОЛ

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Moscow Russia 03/05/17
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter! It’s always nice to hear from you again. Sorry that I haven’t written for so long, but I was really busy with my studies.
ПРИВЕТСТВИЕ+ВСТУПЛЕНИЕ

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Moscow Russia 03/05/17
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter! It’s always nice to hear from you again. Sorry that I haven’t written for so long, but I was really busy with my studies.
ОТВЕТЫ НА 3 ВОПРОСА

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You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen-friend Tom who writes:
... In our city we have an annual competition for teenagers who make their own short films. This year I got the second prize for a film about my grandparents. Do you think it’s important to record family history? Who do you think should do it? How can it be done best?
This month is my mom’s birthday and now I am thinking about a gift for her.
I want it to be very special...
Английский язык
Write a letter to Tom. In your letter:
answer her questions,
ask 3 questions about his mom.
Write 100—140 words.
Remember the rules of letter writing.

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Moscow Russia 03/05/17
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter! It’s always nice to hear from you again. Sorry that I haven’t written for so long, but I was really busy with my studies.
Anyway, in your letter you asked my about family history. I’m sure it’s really important to record family history.
ОТВЕТЫ НА 3 ВОПРОСА

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You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen-friend Tom who writes:
... In our city we have an annual competition for teenagers who make their own short films. This year I got the second prize for a film about my grandparents. Do you think it’s important to record family history? Who do you think should do it? How can it be done best?
This month is my mom’s birthday and now I am thinking about a gift for her.
I want it to be very special...
Английский язык
Write a letter to Tom. In your letter:
answer her questions,
ask 3 questions about his mom.
Write 100—140 words.
Remember the rules of letter writing.

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Moscow Russia 03/05/17
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter! It’s always nice to hear from you again. Sorry that I haven’t written for so long, but I was really busy with my studies.
Anyway, in your letter you asked my about family history. I’m sure it’s really important to record family history. Definitely, children and grandchildren should do something to save family story.
ОТВЕТЫ НА 3 ВОПРОСА

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You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen-friend Tom who writes:
... In our city we have an annual competition for teenagers who make their own short films. This year I got the second prize for a film about my grandparents. Do you think it’s important to record family history? Who do you think should do it? How can it be done best?
This month is my mom’s birthday and now I am thinking about a gift for her.
I want it to be very special...
Английский язык
Write a letter to Tom. In your letter:
answer her questions,
ask 3 questions about his mom.
Write 100—140 words.
Remember the rules of letter writing.

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Moscow Russia 03/05/17
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter! It’s always nice to hear from you again. Sorry that I haven’t written for so long, but I was really busy with my studies.
Anyway, in your letter you asked my about family history. I’m sure it’s really important to record family history. Definitely, children and grandchildren should do something to save family story. To do it best, they can create albums with their family’s photos or record some videos with their relatives.
ОТВЕТЫ НА 3 ВОПРОСА

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You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen-friend Tom who writes:
... In our city we have an annual competition for teenagers who make their own short films. This year I got the second prize for a film about my grandparents. Do you think it’s important to record family history? Who do you think should do it? How can it be done best?
This month is my mom’s birthday and now I am thinking about a gift for her.
I want it to be very special...
Английский язык
Write a letter to Tom. In your letter:
answer her questions,
ask 3 questions about his mom.
Write 100—140 words.
Remember the rules of letter writing.

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Moscow Russia 03/05/17
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter! It’s always nice to hear from you again. Sorry that I haven’t written for so long, but I was really busy with my studies.
Anyway, in your letter you asked my about family history. I’m sure it’s really important to record family history. Definitely, children and grandchildren should do something to save family story. To do it best, they can create albums with their family’s photos or record some videos with their relatives.
Congrats with your mum’s upcoming birthday! How old is your mum? Does she like hand-made presents? ? Is she going to celebrate her birthday?
ЗАДАЕМ 3 ВОПРОСА ПО ТЕМЕ

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Moscow Russia 03/05/17
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your letter! It’s always nice to hear from you again. Sorry that I haven’t written for so long, but I was really busy with my studies.
Anyway, in your letter you asked my about family history. I’m sure it’s really important to record family history. Definitely, children and grandchildren should do something to save family story. To do it best, they can create albums with their family’s photos or record some videos with their relatives.
Congrats with your mum’s upcoming birthday! How old is your mum? Does she like hand-made presents? ? Is she going to celebrate her birthday?
Sorry, I have to go now because I have a lot of homework to do. Drop me a line!
Yours,
Kate
ЗАКЛЮЧЕНИЕ

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К1 Содержание (слов 130!)
Благодарность за письмо и извинение, что не писал раньше (ссылка на предыдущие контакты)
Ответы на 3 вопроса
3 вопроса по теме письма заданы (и в правильном времени)
Надежда на последующие контакты
К2 Организация
Адрес в правом верхнем углу
Дата под адресом
Приветствие, заключительная фраза и прощание
Деление на абзацы (4 абзаца, отступ)
Вводные слова, логика высказывания
К3 Лексика и Грамматика
ПРОВЕРЯЕМ ПО КРИТЕРИЯМ

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Comment on the following statement:
Some young people believe that while at school we should concentrate on studying; others think that working part-time has many advantages.
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What is your opinion?
Write 200–250 words.
Use the following plan:
make an introduction (state the problem);
express your personal opinion and give 2–3 reasons for your opinion;
express an opposing opinion and give 1–2 reasons for this opposing opinion;
explain why you do not agree with the opposing opinion;
make a conclusion restating your position.

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Some young people believe that while at school we should concentrate on studying; others think that working part-time has many advantages.
Английский язык
ПЛАН (АРГУМЕНТЫ)

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Some young people believe that while at school we should concentrate on studying; others think that working part-time has many advantages.
Английский язык
ПЛАН (АРГУМЕНТЫ)

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Some young people believe that while at school we should concentrate on studying; others think that working part-time has many advantages.
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1. Intro Постановка проблемы (две точки зрения), переформулирование темы эссе из КИМа
It has become fashionable for some young people argue that while at school we should focus mainly on studying. However, there are others, who think that working part-time is a good option how to spend your time and energy while at school or university.

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Some young people believe that while at school we should concentrate on studying; others think that working part-time has many advantages.
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2. Your opinion + 2 arguments
To my way of thinking, it is better decision to try part-time job than dedicate all time to studying. There are many things to be said in favour of this point of view. Firstly, you can attempt working in a sphere that you are interested in. You can learn more about professional skills and decide if you want to work in this area in your future. Secondly, you can earn some money and become more financially independent from your parents.

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Some young people believe that while at school we should concentrate on studying; others think that working part-time has many advantages.
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3. Another opinion + 1 argument
However, there are other young people, who claim that while we are studying at school, we should not work. These people are convinced that it is better to get higher education at first and then find a well-paid job. In their opinion, if you work, you do not have enough time to concentrate on studying and you have bad marks at school.

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Some young people believe that while at school we should concentrate on studying; others think that working part-time has many advantages.
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4. Contrargument
I cannot agree with this opinion. As for me, when you work you learn to organize your time and become more responsible. Time-management is a key to successful combination of working and studying at the same time.

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Some young people believe that while at school we should concentrate on studying; others think that working part-time has many advantages.
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5. Conclusion (с подтверждением позиции автора)
To sum up, I want to underline that for me it is absolutely acceptable to study and school or university and have part-time job that gives you experience and extra money. But it is up for everybody do decide whether to work while studying or not.

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Английский язык
It has become fashionable for some young people argue that while at school we should focus mainly on studying. However, there are others, who think that working part-time is a good option how to spend your time and energy while at school or university.
To my way of thinking, it is better decision to try part-time job than dedicate all time to studying. There are many things to be said in favour of this point of view. Firstly, you can attempt working in a sphere that you are interested in. You can learn more about professional skills and decide if you want to work in this area in your future. Secondly, you can earn some money and become more financially independent from your parents.
However, there are other young people, who claim that while we are studying at school, we should not work. These people are convinced that it is better to get higher education at first and then find a well-paid job. In their opinion, if you work, you do not have enough time to concentrate on studying and you have bad marks at school.
I cannot agree with this opinion. As for me, when you work you learn to organize your time and become more responsible. Time-management is a key to successful combination of working and studying at the same time.
To sum up, I want to underline that for me it is absolutely acceptable to study and school or university and have part-time job that gives you experience and extra money. But it is up for everybody do decide whether to work while studying or not.

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К1 Содержание (слов 260! Структура 2-1-1)
Введение – постановка проблемы. Фразы из КИМа переформулированы
Мнение автора + аргумент 2 штуки ☺
Мнение против +аргумент 1 штука ☺
Контраргумент – 1 штука ☺
Заключение с подтерждением позиции автора
К2 Организация
5 абзацев
Логика
Вводные слова
К3 Лексика
Уровень лексики
Лексический ошибки
ПРОВЕРЯЕМ ПО КРИТЕРИЯМ

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К4 Грамматика
Грамматические ошибки (времена, лицо/число, вспомогательные глаголы, окончания глаголов, множественное число сущ, артикли)
К4 Орфография и пунктуация
Написание слов
Запятые (после вводных слов!)
ПРОВЕРЯЕМ ПО КРИТЕРИЯМ