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In today's world, nearly every aspect of life is affected by computer technology, Computers are used for business, public services, education and entertainment
Some people are concerned by this development. They fear that vital skills are being lost as computer technology replaces traditional ways of working in a wide variety of areas, from art and design to banking and commerce. They point out the chaos that can occur when computer systems fail, leading to the breakdown of essential services such as transport, law and order.
However, people could not continue to enjoy their present standard of living without computer technology. There are now far more people in the world than there were a generation ago. The fact that there is enough food for them, that they can travel safely from one place to another, and that they can be provided with medical care, is largely due to computer technology.
In my opinion, therefore, we have to accept our dependence on computers, but at the same time we should work to find ways of making this dependence less dangerous.
Example: People in the modern world depend too much on computers …

Concerned – бути занепокоїним
vital skills – життєво важливі навички
point out – вказувати
occur – відбуватися
generation – покоління
due – належно
therefore – тому
Unknown words

Linking words
However
Far more
In my opinion
Therefore
In fact

Grammar
Are used, are concerned, is affected
Are being lost
Be provided
Should, could

Plan
1. Beginning:
Introduction to computer technology
Using computers
2. Main body:
Fears of people
Life without computers
3. Ending:
People should reduce the dependence of computers

DO stare the topic in your first sentences, but use your own words.
DON`T start by saying I agree with this – your essay schould present your own arguments
DO include supporting detail for the points in each paragraph
DO use linking expressions to introduce points
DON`T forget to express your opinion in the conclusion
Small advices

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On balance then, I feel that...
To sum up/ln conclusion, it seems to me that…